Evaluation of my first draft:

When looking at my first draft of my music video we can see that I have constructed it within the order of my shots as well as matching and being in line with the song "Yours"

For a first attempt it has helped me understand how my music video will be structured, and to see what parts I can change and where I can add any extra scenes in to allow my song/video to work.

Whilst watching this I have noticed only a view of my footage have not matched up in complete line with the song, such as the lines "I wear your winter coat, The one you love to wear" this is something I will need to go back over and ensure that the footage is in line with the song.

Within my video I have some areas in which go to black screen, in some areas of the song this matches. However, in some it does not suit the idea of my song/narrative. This only happened because I needed to shorten the videos down to be in line with the song, so I will need to go back over and work out what extra raw footage I can add into them to fill in the gaps of my video, making sure that they will work with the song as well as its paste.