After completing my first draft to my music and looking at ways in which I needed to improve on and correctly do when completing this second draft.

Within the first draft I had some issues with some of the lip syncing was not in line with the song, well I have updated and tried to match this problem up so that the actress was in line there are some alterations that still need doing with the lip syncing, however for draft 3 I am carrying out further filming for extra scenes within the music video and the lines that still haven't been matched up will altered in filming again or they will be made different, with different scenes. The reason behind doing this is so that I can fill up the black screens that come up during the video which need filling up so this gives me a chance to sort out the lip syncing that needs improving on. (This is in many parts of the song)

With this draft I have played around more with the editing such as cutting some up of the raw videos, adding further video transition effects and looking at cinematic structure as well as changing the colour to my video. In this case it is black and white. The reason for doing this is because I want it to relate to the exsisting "Ella Henderson, Yours" song which was done in this colour so I wanted to keep it the same. As I think it works much better then what the colour version looked. So it keeps this video more consistent with the exsisting further, it works more well with it.

 

Throughout creating this second draft it has allowed me to see what works well with what, looking at changes in which needed to be made. This has helped me to know how to develop it further such as the knowing when the black screen spaces that come in which has allowed me to plan for me to film more scenes shortly before editing again for the thrid draft as well as this draft allowing me to work more with colours such as the black and white. To be able to create more of a narrative that can be shown within my music video.