With this draft I have made sure mostly that all my lip syncing are correct and match the words, but doing this I have stretched across most of my filmed scenes, by also doing this technique I have got rid of the black screen spaces and deletd most of the transitions that were not needed. I also tried matching up my scenes with the same lightness to the black and white scenes, to make this continuous. 

Overall, I believe that my music video is starting to shape the way in which I am needing it to feel the criteria in which I was needing to make my music video more successful.